I wish you all the happiness I have and what I don't
I wish you all the misery that keeps us opening up
To the thousand words I never say rolled into some
like
Have a fantastic day or my favourite, no worries, it's ok.
For within this world I promise you all thoughts do come true
Never really in a way that we know or can even see
As a ripple can't remember it's wave until the coast is clear
Only what is in this perpetual moment of changing gears
To stay in neutral is not natural but relieves many fears
This is not wisdom of age but an aged old wish that's still here
To slow down pointless suffering on generations gone by
Although each of us is a droplet together we can turn the tides
When dreams become reality from the well in our mind
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Bit of random flow... or is it! Enjoyed doing it anyway and that's the point. Love what you do and do what you love, keep up the write my friends. Always appreciated with much peace and respect
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A good poem , Dan 🙂 they say your thoughts create your reality .,, or you attract things related to the energy you send out . I’ve heard that before ( related to the law of attraction ) I think on some level it may be true but who knows .., I’m
Not sure it makes you feel good tho , especially if you’ve been through difficult situations or are not receiving what you want in life .,,
Just my thoughts on it .
Love your last line ... “ when dreams become reality from the well in our mind “
My life story is that my friend from a very young age of going my own way, nothing has been the same.
Then I saw a guy on TV and dream of doing that too, 15 years later I am doing that and way more.
First step is always thought before action, then it just becomes a learnt pattern!
Everything is possible once you believe... in you!
I saw this video of a man skateboarding with his son and daughter.... it made me happy, they all looked very happy. The dogs were loving it..... and there's poetry too...
. .....what a life.
You're still a day behind but I always love your rhyme, life gets even better sharing a good connection online.
Always appreciate your spirit reminding me to shine
I was trying to take yer memory back to a passed event. You have plenty of happy memories as well as the sad ones. Huge question mate.....would you rather be anyone else?
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Well said Dan .. if it can be said .. tis best to say it like you mean it ... N
Yeah, I definitely ment to ramble and feel good! Mission accomplished and bonus for you stopping by!
Always appreciated my friend
If this, be your battle cry
I'll be your flag carrier
asking
'where to, dear Poet
who next, do we run to
lets save the world
one syllable at a time
in this poetic dreamscape
of all-things: empathetically Humane;
you lead, I'll grow into your footprints
my friend!'
My mind was on fire as I read your words as soon as I finished and felt a beautiful shiver, I had to get it all out in the only way I know.
With this battle cry from deep down in my soul.
If there is ever a days when your feeling the low, know that to me your like a lighthouse that's kept me going up right and bold.
Never to let off until my boat is gone.
Thank you again for getting me closer to my 777th poem
Congrats! 💪😎🍻
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