Scene:
A spider in the fire light
weaves a solemn web
Cue the drumbeat, slow and steady...
Now the bass...
Bring up the volume...
Narrator:
'In death, breath no longer has meaning'
Increase volume on the bass...
'In life, it is the essence of being'
Cue the trumpet, slow and mournful...
'In sleep, we walk in both worlds and exist in neither'
Cue the second trumpet, softly echoing the first...
'Some men paint their dreams'
Slow fade out...
'Others, their nightmares'
Screen fades to black and music stops...
'What will you paint in the hours before dawn'
Five second pause...
Switch off...
- Author: Coyote ( Offline)
- Published: August 19th, 2021 12:36
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 28
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Comments6
the atmosphere is a vibe
Thanks๐
Love the format, the idea, and the excellence of the whole.
Really good stuff, original. Envious of your creative mind.
Thank you!๐
I somehow found myself stuck on these words,
"'Some men paint their dreams'
Slow fade out...
'Others, their nightmares'"...
Brilliant Coyote. ๐
Thank you AP๐
Thanks ๐
WOW! this is awesome. I write simple poems. You take them to another .level . Thank you for sharing .
Thank you for the awesome comment AP๐
Thank you for sharing your work.
All of the above C, and then some....
You aren't leaving us to write for the stage, are you? Been there, done that?,,,..disclose!
LOL, nah Dave. I'm much too lazy to write for a living, even if the stage would have me. Thanks for the kind words๐
you're Awesome!
thank you, for allowing us to witness
your poetic genius
I'm humbled! Thank you soooooo much!
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