The luminous lights of heaven
surround me in open arms,
Inviting me to dance.
As hellish steps possess my feet,
A new vessel at your command.
The brighter my colors beam,
The more your presence darkens.
A shadow that can't be seen,
Your silhouette soon forgotten.
Turn to face me now,
Please don't disappear.
For every dreary ballroom,
needs a chandelier.
Within this colorless crowd,
They shall be our clouds.
A spotlight in the sky,
We fly,
we fall,
We drown.
Like weeping tears descending
from the heaven that condemned us.
Your hand in mine we take the fall,
From the stage to end it all.
And in our final moments,
You turn to me and say,
“It seems our performance has fallen flat.”
By.A1Saccharine
-YourFriendlyGhostwriter
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Author:
A1Saccharine (
Offline) - Published: August 20th, 2021 12:00
- Comment from author about the poem: Hello! This poem is a Revamp of an old poem I made called \\\"a Walz in Rainbows\\\". It has seen drastic changes that I hope you all can enjoy! constructive criticism is welcome as well as interpretations. Thank you!
- Category: Love
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Comments2
I am in awe. Thank you for sharing
I'm grateful that you enjoyed it!
Thank you. It certainly is thought provoking. I enjoyed swimming through the images or rather dancing through them.
Awe I see what you did there XD, Thank you for reading!
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