A Dream

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  aDarkerMind August 22nd, 2021 08:26

  one to read many times..to enjoy, to savour, and to read many times again;
  

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    DoveAugust 22nd, 2021 08:35

    Thanks so much! I’m glad you enjoyed the read! Much appreciated

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  Accidental Poet August 22nd, 2021 08:50

  A very passionate write Dove. A dream to cherish. 👍

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    DoveAugust 22nd, 2021 09:01

    Thanks AP, yes one of the few good dreams!

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  Neville August 22nd, 2021 09:49

  
  this is so cool it is decidedly hotter than hot .. brilliantly crafted too and by Jove .. how I wish it had been writ with yours truly in mind .. but then all us blokes whether they admit it or not will be thinking the same ................... 🙂 x
  

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    DoveAugust 25th, 2021 09:50

    You are too kind dear Neville! Thanks for stopping by

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  orchidee August 22nd, 2021 10:36

  Now you knew I would swoon! What can I do? Read it again! heehee.

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    DoveAugust 25th, 2021 09:51

    Awe! Thanks Orchidee!

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  The elder poet August 22nd, 2021 10:57

  Very well written. We can't seem to request our dreams. If we could we would never get out of the bed. Dreams of love come to us all. I write of these often .I go to bed each night hoping that a dream will bring back a lost love . Just for an instant. I enjoyed your poen very much. Thank you for sharing your dream.
  

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    DoveAugust 25th, 2021 09:53

    Thank you kindly, indeed we can’t put in a request for dreams, but some of us are fortunate to have great dreams, thanks for stopping by, much appreciated

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  dusk arising August 22nd, 2021 14:07

  Oh yes, those dreams are like that, leaving you wishing they could continue.... but slowly the brain wave patterns of sleep mould into daytime patterns and last nights bliss becomes intangible. Frustration ensues..... but tonite, those places will be alive again... and.... and.... que sera sera.

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    DoveAugust 25th, 2021 09:55

    Thanks DA, I had a few dreams wishing I didn’t wake up! Thanks for the read and comment

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  Doggerel Dave August 22nd, 2021 19:45

  Lust, (sorry) - Last stanza got me to perfection. The rest? Yeh well, if from a slightly different viewpoint, I'll have that as well....
  

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    DoveAugust 25th, 2021 09:57

    Lol, I should have replaced lust with a more elegant word! But alas, we all dream differently!

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    Doggerel DaveAugust 25th, 2021 19:17

    No, in no sense was my use of that word critical, Dove. The process went something like this: Read you poem, absorbed it, enjoyed it greatly, Scrolled through the other contributions to ensure I wouldn't repeat them too much and settled down to contribute myself. Just became momentarily pleased with the similarity between the words last and lust....

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  L. B. Mek August 23rd, 2021 04:11

  Beautifully worded!
  Sensuality, at its most wholesome and refined.
  thanks for sharing, dear poet

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    DoveAugust 25th, 2021 09:58

    Thank you kindly Dear Sir Mek, much appreciated! Thanks for stopping by