Helpless, I take too much, I breathe too much
And I wish you would understand
I am not a window for your rainfall, advice
When I'm helpless and breathing too much
I see the magic in you
So close to death, so close to sleep
My fate belongs to a prestigious Valkyrie
A mountain in Hollywood endlessly crumbling
With each new year and each new sentimental longing
I have dreams for a void, a theory no one cares about
You opened me like Pandora
Just to take my feelings away
I trusted you more than I should
I turn my back and I have no doubts
I always seen you like glass
I knew you would leave me here
Breathing too much
Helpless, I take too much, I breathe too much
And I wish you would understand
I am not a window for your rainfall, advice
When I'm helpless and breathing too much
I see the magic in you.
- Author: Jordan Cash (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: August 22nd, 2021 18:11
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments1
Beautiful
This great line:
'I am not a window for your rainfall'
Perfectly capturing a feeling
It could have a dual meaning: and in a way I'm maybe referring to myself. Sometimes it's draining when you feel like a burden, or you feel like you're helpless and there's nothing you can do to help someone you love!
It's all mixed up together with love - the hurt and glory of it all 🖤
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