Divine Surrender

A Boy With Roses

Helpless, I take too much, I breathe too much                                                                  

And I wish you would understand                                                                                      

I am not a window for your rainfall, advice                                                      

When I'm helpless and breathing too much                                                                                                       

I see the magic in you

 

So close to death, so close to sleep                                                                        

My fate belongs to a prestigious Valkyrie                                                                          

A mountain in Hollywood endlessly crumbling                                                                

With each new year and each new sentimental longing                                                                    

I have dreams for a void, a theory no one cares about

 

You opened me like Pandora                                                                                                    

Just to take my feelings away                                                                                            

I trusted you more than I should                                                                                                    

I turn my back and I have no doubts                                                                                                        

I always seen you like glass                                                                                          

I knew you would leave me here                                                                            

Breathing too much

 

Helpless, I take too much, I breathe too much                                                                  

And I wish you would understand                                                                                      

I am not a window for your rainfall, advice                                                      

When I'm helpless and breathing too much                                                                                                    

I see the magic in you.

  • Author: Jordan Cash (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 22nd, 2021 18:11
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Comments1

  • rebmasters

    Beautiful

    This great line:

    'I am not a window for your rainfall'

    Perfectly capturing a feeling

    • A Boy With Roses

      It could have a dual meaning: and in a way I'm maybe referring to myself. Sometimes it's draining when you feel like a burden, or you feel like you're helpless and there's nothing you can do to help someone you love!

      • rebmasters

        It's all mixed up together with love - the hurt and glory of it all 🖤



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