Absorption

rebmasters

Fresh from a shower of sweet, summer rain
you show up at my door.
So intoxicating;
supple muscles
endlessly vibrating
with inner energy.

I want to drink you in;
you’re dewy to the touch
& your dark scent,
like Scandinavian florals,
draws me to you.

Cover me in hay
harvested in sunlight.

Enfold me, subsume me
so we can coalesce
& I will become a
speck within your cosmos
forever happy there
& self-aware;
a part of you

  • Author: rebmasters (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 24th, 2021 01:00
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Caring dove

    So beautiful ! 🙂🙂 great writing

    • rebmasters

      Thank you! This one is quite special to me cause it's my 100th poem published on here, which is hard to believe!!

      • Caring dove

        Well done ! I think I have over hundred on here . So nice to feel your good at something .🙂x

      • Caring dove

        “ I will become a speck within your cosmos , forever happy there , and self aware , a part of you “
        Love these lines

        • rebmasters

          Thank you - a little over the top romantic, but I can't help it ❤

        • L. B. Mek

          'like Scandinavian florals,
          draws me to you.

          Cover me in hay
          harvested in sunlight.

          Enfold me, subsume me
          so we can coalesce'..
          you're just getting more and more refined
          with your distinct imagery, in my humble opinion
          its such a pleasure
          to watch your talents blossom, dear poet
          keep striving and climbing, so happy for you!

          • rebmasters

            Thank you my dear ❤️

          • Jay-Lee Jane

            the last stanza has given me goosebumps!! i love it!

            • rebmasters

              Ah thank you so much. That's a lovely comment - I'm honoured ❤



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