Fresh from a shower of sweet, summer rain
you show up at my door.
So intoxicating;
supple muscles
endlessly vibrating
with inner energy.
I want to drink you in;
you’re dewy to the touch
& your dark scent,
like Scandinavian florals,
draws me to you.
Cover me in hay
harvested in sunlight.
Enfold me, subsume me
so we can coalesce
& I will become a
speck within your cosmos
forever happy there
& self-aware;
a part of you
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So beautiful ! 🙂🙂 great writing
Thank you! This one is quite special to me cause it's my 100th poem published on here, which is hard to believe!!
Well done ! I think I have over hundred on here . So nice to feel your good at something .🙂x
“ I will become a speck within your cosmos , forever happy there , and self aware , a part of you “
Love these lines
Thank you - a little over the top romantic, but I can't help it ❤
'like Scandinavian florals,
draws me to you.
Cover me in hay
harvested in sunlight.
Enfold me, subsume me
so we can coalesce'..
you're just getting more and more refined
with your distinct imagery, in my humble opinion
its such a pleasure
to watch your talents blossom, dear poet
keep striving and climbing, so happy for you!
Thank you my dear ❤️
the last stanza has given me goosebumps!! i love it!
Ah thank you so much. That's a lovely comment - I'm honoured ❤
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