Leaving With The Sun

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  L. B. Mek August 26th, 2021 02:22

  'tickets for an escape shelter
  in the middle of a deserted, cloud
  wings spread wide, son by my side
  and I warn him endlessly, knowing
  he's tired of my voice
  'not too, high
  nor too low
  keep your dreams, sailing
  in that middle, where
  you'll find safety, hiding
  in amongst, the majority herd'...
  as Aurora, opens the gates
  I check our wax layers
  one last fateful, time!'
  (what can I say my friend
  your brilliance has inspired me again
  actually your write, originally took me
  to Tracy Chapman's song 'Fast Car')
  'You got a fast car
  I want a ticket to anywhere
  Maybe we make a deal
  Maybe together we can get somewhere
  Any place is better
  Starting from zero got nothing to lose
  Maybe we'll make something
  Me, myself, I got nothing to prove
  
  You got a fast car
  I got a plan to get us outta here
  I been working at the convenience store
  Managed to save just a little bit of money
  Won't have to drive too far
  Just 'cross the border and into the city
  You and I can both get jobs
  And finally see what it means to be living'
  

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    Kurt Philip BehmAugust 26th, 2021 02:26

    No one is as artful a commentator as you.
    
    Thanks again
    
    Kurt

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  Laura🌻 August 27th, 2021 23:47

  Kurt,
  
  …and the light shall guide you!
  
  Laura🌻

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    Kurt Philip BehmAugust 28th, 2021 02:13

    Amen… thank you Laura