Confused

Trevor_Ricardo17$



Titles erupt from my skull.

I heard of Stanzas and lines.

I heard there are two types of this

(English and Italian).

However,which is which remains

My daily question.

I tried from an early age,

Yet I'm still confused.

Will I ever get it right?

Who'd tell me if I do?

I'm on my own in this,

There is no direction or

Whatsoever.

The ambition multiplies daily,

Yet the confusion preaches

The opposite to me.

Yes, I'd love to be assisted.

However, who's willing to assist?

Yes, I'm stranded,

Stranded on a vast dessert.

Yelling my heart out for redemption.

  • Author: Trevor Phelane (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 1st, 2021 16:06
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this poem reflecting on the path I'm going through. The undying love I got for poetry yet I got nothing to show for it. All I need/needed is to be told what do I have to do to be a great writer one day.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 38
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  • L. B. Mek

    read, read, read
    then read some more
    or get a short cut, by attending a poetry course
    which will teach you
    to read, read, read...
    before writing
    first, learn to read
    not just count-out your abc's
    the real meaning's, hidden
    between the ink
    when you can begin
    to differentiate, between
    alphabet, grouped for effect
    or syllables counted-out, for rhythmic fluidity
    and, the real poetry: where sincerity reigns supreme!
    then, you'll have found an avenue
    to realising, exactly why
    you want to write, until then
    everything else, we scribble
    are just elaborated diary entries
    in the guise, of wannabe poetry...
    good luck, dear Poet!
    enjoy the ride, its fleeting but worth every sacrifice!
    (in my humble opinion)

    • Trevor_Ricardo17$

      I get that ❤️🔥 I'll definitely improve and I'm so willing to read till I get it right ❤️🔥 thanks a lot for you opinion, I appreciate it a lot...it means a lot to me❤️🔥 thank you...

      So out of 10,how do you rate this poem🤔?

      • L. B. Mek

        who am I to rate any poem?! lol
        Trust in yourself, above all else!
        rate it yourself, honestly
        taking into account where you are in your poetic journey;
        then try to score better, next time
        and on....

      • Doggerel Dave

        Yes - read and read again and ask what makes sense to you - that way you will establish your own voice.
        MPS has, not only this community going, but an archive of great and established poets within easy access - go for it.... Oh, and before I forget ... Welcome to MPS...



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