I saw the stars in the blue sky;
The same time I lost peace in my heart.
Hopelessly, I started praying for my sins,
And every single breathe brought pain.
One day longer than a 1000 years;
I felt like the world was a small dot,
And the seas were a single rain drop!
With my crying eyes, I saw devil's face.
God was noway near by my side,
I thought I was supposed to die right there,
But death rejected my call, and I survived.
It was nothing like my end, it was just a dream.
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Author:
Pacifique Niyitanga (
Offline) - Published: September 2nd, 2021 15:25
- Category: Fantasy
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Comments1
wonderful, really liked your flow
great use of contradiction in your imagery:
'One day longer than a 1000 years;'
'And the seas were a single rain drop'
to highlight
how removed from reality you felt, in that moment..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
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