In the gentle clouds hovering over the flowing water,
your face sparkles bashfully like a jewel hiding behind the fluffy morning clouds.
A shining face like a gleaming gem that derives its light from the purity of its heart.
A heart that reflects the light of the bright morning that spreads its rays over the vast green plains.
The green plains that stretch so deep into the expanse of the meadows of your spacious heart.
The specious meadows where your fresh and lively youth rejoices.
Your youth that rocks the wildflowers with joy when you runs around.
When your youth sings, the whole deserted forest listened intently.
The entire gloomy forest echoes your singing with joy.
Your angelic voice whose melodies can gather the birds of the air.
The birds of the air that join the choir of your heart's singing band.
Your lyrical heart that dispels the fog of the heart of the black forest by the light of its cheerful melodies.
The lonely heart of the forest which is inhabited by the horror of its ghostly stillness.
The ghostly stillness that spreads a sense of terrifying loneliness around the untrodden corners of the forest.
But now your shining face becomes the sun of this dark forest that dispels the gloom of its nights.
and now your voice resonates with the melodies of its chirpy birds over its bubbling currents.
The bubbling gleaming currents which reflect the lights of your fascinating eyes.
You have become the bright delight of this black forest.
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Author:
Samer Amin (
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'The lonely heart of the forest
which is inhabited by the horror
of its ghostly stillness.
The ghostly stillness
that spreads a sense of terrifying loneliness
around the untrodden corners of the forest.
But now your shining face
becomes the sun of this dark forest
that dispels the gloom of its nights.'
(may we all be granted a glimpse
of our fated 'shining face', in life
and most importantly
may we have accumulated, enough
gleaned wisdom
to recognise its presences in our lives
whilst its still hovering, near enough
to be appreciated and treasured
whether fleeting, or infinite its role: by our side...)
as challenging as you make reading your write's
I (eventually), found this to be a beautiful read
thanks for choosing to share
a timely write imbued with so much hopeful positivity
much needed, in this bleak and challenging time's!
Many thanks to my dear poet for your encouraging feedback, and for highlighting the main central moral of these lines in a very comprehensive definition and explanation.
A very beautiful poem. 🙂 Loved reading it.
Thank you so much ! I'm so glad because you liked it.
Each and every line is full of vision.❤
Thank you so much dear Ali for your encouraging comment.
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