If you ask me what should be your first responsibility?
My answer will be,
"Live your life in every moment."
If you ask me what is the best task in the whole life?
My answer will be,
"Try your best to give your mother what she deserves."
If you ask me what does the life mean?
My answer will be,
"It means a journey of learning."
If you ask me how do we learn best?
My answer will be,
"When we face pain and struggle."
If you ask me what is the cure of all pain?
My answer will be,
"It is love."
If you ask me how to find true love?
My answer will be,
"Love is the reward of love."
If you ask me how to be a good lover?
My answer will be,
"Leave all grief and sorrow and be hopeful."
If you ask me how to be happy?
My answer will be,
"Be kind with others."
If you ask me how to be kind to everyone?
My answer will be,
"Try to recognize your own weaknesses."
If you ask me how to live a perfect life?
My answer will be,
"Be patient,
be honest and
be simple."
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Author:
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- Category: Reflection
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Life in a nutshell
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My answers would all be the same as you have in your poem. Excellent hope. 👍
So many thanks dear poet...😄🙃
a good read
some insightful observations, thanks for sharing..
but love is not 'a cure' of pain,
that's just idolised wishful thinking..
love is merely that, love
if it could cure pain
we wouldn't have needed mold to 'penicillin' our fight for survival
or Psychiatrist's, as 'heart' surgeons!
love is too, Real:
to be glamourized as some fantastical otherworldly notion or supposition theory...
a poetic St, once - said it best
'Love is not, All':
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-19250 )
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yes I agree with you dear poet.🙃
besides medicine Love is also necessary.
I used here the mental pain and I didn't think in deeper way. I should notice this. Thanks for ypur opinion dear.
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