HELL

Simple-Man87

The world around me is burning
Yet I see no flame
Time and again I get closer, never learning
Burned again and again. 

The embers soar, blanketing the sky
Panorama of ash
Left behind with no reason why
Alone at last. 

Wandering through this Armageddon
Salvation in hand
Wondering if my brain would let the lead in
Escaping this shell called man 

In the midst of this temple massage
An Angel appeared
Approaching her to find her a mirage
It was just as I feared


Now with nothing and with no hesitation
The hammer is drawn
Left in the street, this bloody presentation
A once loved man..... 

......... is gone

  • Author: Simple-Man87 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 8th, 2021 12:22
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • iAli

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    • Simple-Man87

      Thank you for the smile

    • AuburnScribbler

      A powerful scene that's been beautifully worded.

      Bravo Simple-Man87, I hope all is well!

      • Simple-Man87

        That was very kind. Thank you for taking the time to read it.

      • HannahElisabeth

        "A once loved man is gone" really hit me hard, this was a very moving piece

        • Simple-Man87

          Hannah, thank you. That comment meant a lot. I appreciate your time.

          • HannahElisabeth

            Thank you for sharing šŸ–¤

          • LaurašŸŒ»

            S-M87,

            You donā€™t see the flame because it is within. Donā€™t let that ash shroud the beautiful blue sky thatā€™s there for you to see. Within that shell of a man
            ā€¦as you say itā€¦
            thereā€™s beauty and a gentle soul. That carnal ā€œAngelā€ was not there because it was not worthy of you. Let it not be said ā€œA once loved man is goneā€. Heā€™s there with a guardian Angel upon his shoulder. Listen carefullyā€¦youā€™ll be guided toward that blue sky and see the light. That light will shine within you and guide you. Listen to your guardian Angel upon your shoulder and be patient.
            Patience is the key.
            Wishing you all the best. You deserve it.

            LaurašŸŒ»

            • Simple-Man87

              Laura, thank you kindly. You always have comments that seem to be more poetic than my poem..lol.
              Thank you for taking the time to read and moreover, for taking the time to write that beautiful comment.

              • LaurašŸŒ»

                Youā€™re very welcome, my friend.šŸ˜Š
                I can feel your sadness in your poem.
                Stay as positive as you can. ā€˜Listenā€™ to your guardian Angel.šŸ˜‡
                Youā€™ll be okay.

              • L. B. Mek

                really well written
                thanks for sharing

                • Simple-Man87

                  Thank you L.B. I really appreciate your compliment.



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