falling into autumn glory

dusk arising




a September shock of pouring rain finds me
beneath city trees falling to autumnal glory...
..floating thoughts on pools before my eyes


.                       so gently....
.                       her fingers caress the keys
.                       flowing velvet softness
.                       into the 'ere silent dusty air 
.                       and our lives breathe once more
.                       yesterdays airy trance of
.                       love's sweet sonata


.                                             cascading golden leaf-fall memories
.                                             paint pavement wet love-lost pictures
.                                             in scatter of patterned rainfall tears

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 10th, 2021 00:08
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments6

  • Saxon Crow

    Ooooo check you out Mr Shakespeare with your masterfully penned piece. Very enjoyable read Dusk. Faved

    • dusk arising

      Thank you Mr Crow. I've never read any Shakespear, do you rate him? Pleased u enjoyed this piece.

      • Saxon Crow

        Yeah he's alright a bit unoriginal and very pretentious. I don't think he'll go very far though

      • 4 more comments

      • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

        Beautiful words dusk ) loved the read

        • dusk arising

          Thank you yellowrose, pleased you enjoyed this one.

        • orchidee

          Good write dusk.

        • Fay Slimm.

          What an experience to hear romantic music while reading your tender and heart-touching words -- a winner here Dusk and must have this in my list of favourites. Love it.

          • dusk arising

            Thank you Fay. Was difficult to chose a suitable piano piece for this, She played Debussy often and very well, a favourite composer of mine now.
            Honoured to be fav'd by you.

          • L. B. Mek

            Brilliant!

            • dusk arising

              As the late Eric Morecomb used to say "I resemble that remark!". Thank you LBM.

            • Neville

              You can beat an egg etc etc .. but this is hard to beat ....................... N

              • dusk arising

                As a buddhist may reply Ohmm-let it be. Thank you Neville.



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