a September shock of pouring rain finds me
beneath city trees falling to autumnal glory...
..floating thoughts on pools before my eyes
. so gently....
. her fingers caress the keys
. flowing velvet softness
. into the 'ere silent dusty air
. and our lives breathe once more
. yesterdays airy trance of
. love's sweet sonata
. cascading golden leaf-fall memories
. paint pavement wet love-lost pictures
. in scatter of patterned rainfall tears
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Author:
dusk arising (
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Comments6
Ooooo check you out Mr Shakespeare with your masterfully penned piece. Very enjoyable read Dusk. Faved
Thank you Mr Crow. I've never read any Shakespear, do you rate him? Pleased u enjoyed this piece.
Yeah he's alright a bit unoriginal and very pretentious. I don't think he'll go very far though
LOL How very dare you??? You compared me to this no hoper!
Oh, only in the ephemeral sense. Your work will clearly last all space and time Dusk.
I was hoping for something more.
(bloody pre Madonna poets) tch!
Beautiful words dusk ) loved the read
Thank you yellowrose, pleased you enjoyed this one.
Good write dusk.
Thank you orchi.
What an experience to hear romantic music while reading your tender and heart-touching words -- a winner here Dusk and must have this in my list of favourites. Love it.
Thank you Fay. Was difficult to chose a suitable piano piece for this, She played Debussy often and very well, a favourite composer of mine now.
Honoured to be fav'd by you.
Brilliant!
As the late Eric Morecomb used to say "I resemble that remark!". Thank you LBM.
You can beat an egg etc etc .. but this is hard to beat ....................... N
As a buddhist may reply Ohmm-let it be. Thank you Neville.
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