Fablon

Neville

Fablon

 

One side of her is pretty

The other, is far too intense and sticky

So good at hiding blemishes, stains and lies of course

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 11th, 2021 02:23
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    I'm gonna dash to meet her. Should I?! lol.

    • Neville



      I would stay glued to ya seat if ya don't wanna end up as guinea-pig minced meat ........................... 🙂

    • Fay Slimm.

      Ah - such clever imagery to get the point over Nev. Fablon makes the perfect metaphor . Two-sided natures never won suitors -
      but can't say I blame them for preferring truth's face...........x

      • Neville



        ... thank you for sticking with this old fella through thick n thin, my dear lady Fay ....................... N x

      • dusk arising

        Great analogy Neville. Fablon, she looks great at first take but the closer u get, you see the facade.... oooh and just as you say.... getting in deeper leads to just one tacky mess.

        • Neville


          I have recently noticed that I am beginning to sound like a stuckkkkk record DA ... Thank you kindly all the same sir ................................................................................................ 🙂

        • Jerry Reynolds

          Good write, Neville.
          Two faced love is a sticky wicket.

          • Neville



            Too true my friend & thank you .... however, I don't believe she gets around as much these days .. glued to the screen most probably .................................. N 🙂

          • myself and me

            We are all fablon in a sense, it depends on which side has been exposed. I can't believe that a piece of fablon could inspire such an amazing writing.

            • Neville



              How FAB is that ...................... cheers N 🙂

            • Caring dove

              Appearances can be deceptive sometimes .... someone may appear to be one thing but be someone else

              • Neville



                it happens all the time doesn't it .. best keep our wits about us ............................. and a machine gun 🙂 x

              • jarcher54

                We don't call it Fablon over here stateside... but it can be just as alluring, sticky, and deceitful

                • Neville



                  Fabtastic it aint, is it ..................... cheers jarcher54 🙂

                • L. B. Mek

                  greedy fingers, lead to sticky mouths and cheeks
                  once lifeline jars, emptied and shattered
                  and everyone asking, who
                  to blame?
                  and wont you know it, there's always
                  one person that arrives late, and acts
                  so dramatically hurt and surprised, as-if
                  only they get effected by consequences of involuntary circumstances...
                  that same person, is always quick
                  to assign blame and hijack any narrative to insure their want's and needs are prioritised, at any cost..
                  and yet, in those rare moments
                  Angels: are born, from the serenity
                  of her dimpled smile...
                  and so I ask, what vulture
                  corrupted such potential for goodness
                  from such an early and critical age?!
                  (sorry my friend, this took me to a very personal place,
                  as always, I thank you
                  for inspiring me, with your
                  ever so subtle - empathetically transcendent: poetry)

                  • Neville



                    I am both honoured & humbled L.B ... thank you very much indeed my fine literary friend .. N

                  • Dove

                    I could use fabalon! Them cabinets of mine are pretty worn!
                    Always good to read you! if this was a metaphor for some
                    sticky personality, lol I say run, lol

                    • Neville



                      what else is a meta phor eh ................................ 🙂 xx



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