Fay Slimm.

Unsaid.

 

Unsaid.

 

And he only appeared in her dreams

to whisper discretely of things

better unsaid

yet her lonely heart always listened.

Comments8

  • orchidee

    Good write Fay.

  • dusk arising

    Oh wow! I really like this little gem.
    It's favourites time !! lol

  • Neville


    Amazingly good .. or Supa as we say in Bulgaria ....................................... x

  • Neil Higgins

    Excellent.
    Or... rhagorol.
    As my grandparents used to say in Wales.

  • Jerry Reynolds

    Good write, Fay.
    A real Jewel.

  • Robert Haigh

    The man of her dreams. Nicely expressed, Fay.

  • myself and me

    Superb.

  • PrEm Ji

    Silence is the language of love!



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