In love with an angel,
Stuck in an endless emotions,
Secretly drowning in a peaceful love
I'm diving too deep, I think.
Compressed between
I no longer protest a thing
For I'm surrounded by her presence
This river is flowing for good, I can tell
She took my heart away
Fulfilled my brain with her thoughts
And none of my walls is still standing
I cannot resist it, I know.
My heartbeat depicts all she possesses
I'm comprised by her smile
Her skin illuminates in the dark night
I am over flown with the idea of our sentiments.
Her touch and I dream at day
She brings stars at day and light at night,
Oh beautiful girl, the one who changed me
The only choice I chose to choose, I love her.
I am going crazy
Maybe I should go slow or lazy
Damn she's my lady
I'm dying to hear her saying "I'm ready"
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Author:
Pacifique Niyitanga (
Offline) - Published: September 12th, 2021 15:41
- Comment from author about the poem: Wrote this in collaboration with Divine Ukwishatse.
- Category: Love
- Views: 12
- User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.
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Comments1
this is wonderful
I think your evocative title, although attention grabbing
detracts, from the poetic beauty of your write..
(we must be ever aware of the context, inferred
in our word choices, and 'holocaust' shouldn't be one we utilise, easily)
should you, 'Choose' to retitle this work
you'll find a lot more people actually connect with the sentiments and emotions, you've so eloquently portrayed in this write
in my humble opinion..
'Compressed between, I
no longer protest a thing
For I'm surrounded, by her presence
This river is flowing for good, I can tell
She, took my heart away
Fulfilled, my 'every need' with her thought's
And none
of my walls is still standing, I cannot resist'
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