Faze

SarahG

Lightheaded and cold, what is the point of staying bold. 
I could only hide for so long until pieces of me unfold.
Eyes heavy, room boil.
Tell me why am I still awake.
In a blink of an eye, I’m in a new place.

  • Author: SarahG (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 16th, 2021 00:00
  • Comment from author about the poem: 1st poem. 12:59pm
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments2

  • Doggerel Dave


    No background no context do you provide;
    It stands alone, a masterpiece, you decide.
    There’s no need to bother with other’s work -
    That will be one task so easy to shirk.
    Nothing about you – moving right along
    To yet another site, its call so strong…….?

    • SarahG

      Could I get a brief explanation of this?

    • Doggerel Dave

      Does it need one? MPS gets many first poems without context, no 'About me' no poems read followed by disappearance. Is that you?



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