Sudden Death

jo

It was like the bottom layer of my guts suddenly got taken away
So everything dropped and went out of place
And had a very feint ache
And in my head
Things started tightening
A little bit of twisting too
And grey and black started seeping in
And seeping out from what was already there

To hear it was a shock
To speak it made it real
So the tears came
But words didn’t release it
It stayed there all day
And grew in the background
As I thought of more and more “no mores”
And “never agains”
For their family
Their children

And I didn't want to believe it

  • Author: jo (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 16th, 2021 04:33
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Comments1

  • L. B. Mek

    such a haunting read,
    when we hear some of the unimaginable atrocities that occur in the world, everyday
    and we're stunned, aghast and made speechless, this is how we feel I think:
    ' bottom layer of my guts suddenly got taken away
    So everything dropped and went out of place
    And had a very feint ache
    And in my head
    Things started tightening
    A little bit of twisting too
    And grey and black started seeping in
    And seeping out from what was already there

    To hear it was a shock
    To speak it made it real
    So the tears came
    But words didn’t release it
    It stayed there all day'
    (if this write, was about people
    who were close to you
    I'm sorry for your loss, dear poet)

    • jo

      thx



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