This Giant House


First you call lightly,

Then the screams become more serious,

Soon the yelling is painful,

Begging for mercy,

Promising to be a better man,

That kind of desperation,

You’re trapped,

Bath robe and all,

And u rented a giant house,

And you are all alone,

This is your cross to bare,

It pretty clear it will be a while until family finds you,

The amenities were fantastic,

You got lost in your rental castle,

Where was the cell phone when you need it?

Then blood loss was getting bad.

That’s the last bear trap trick for you,

Stop trying to risk everything it’s scary


  • Doggerel Dave

    Really don't think I'm likely to own or encounter a bear trap but believe I am open minded enough to take your advice without the need for any experiential learning.
    Interesting little write.

  • germanamericanchurch

    Bears traps take extra finesse

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