A rose stands in the garden
a warming fire on a refreshing blanket of tenderness
unseen flames lovingly sitting on a talkative stem
who rests with ease on a blanket , as if a soft chatty girl were at a picnic
loving the time surrounded by the grass with a tenderness within
a red rose with petals that simply love the green grass
a rose stands in the garden
invisible bubbles float above her
lightness within and lightness all around
as if there were no worries and no burdens
just beautiful bubbles around petals
lightness living around a girl who’s sitting on a blanket
with feet that are grounded to the earth , as she rests with a warming ease
a rose stands in the garden
sitting on a blanket without any words to read
she may not have a book or be engaged in following words in a story
but simply reflecting on the grass below her feet
comfortable and at ease , feeling safe and supported with a softness within and a refreshing sound all around
white clouds circle gladly up above
such a difference in colour to the red petals
but they are warming just the same with a peaceful softness speaking in the blue
reflecting the internal peace that she feels
a rose stands in the garden
her petals are like that of velvet or at least they seem to be
with a warming fire within
soft , peaceful , grounded
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Author:
Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 17th, 2021 11:30
- Comment from author about the poem: My sister gave me a few words to use in this poem .., rose , bubbles , book and velvet
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Comments5
Good write Rose.
I see you as that rose Yellowrose, and this MPS as the blanket upon which you stand, well grounded. The grass, lightness and invisible bubbles are the poets here on MPS who love your work.
"safe and supported with a softness within and a refreshing sound all around" your words.
I think those cotton wool clouds you write about are the beauty of word ideas floating there for you to pluck and place within your poetry too.
Another, this time VERY, enjoyable poem from you and goes into my favourites.
Thankyou dusk , for your kind thoughts on my poem . It is probably about me , aswell as a rose . At the time of writing this I felt quite calm and peaceful ... and comfortable . I liked writing these words .,, I think the bubbles are just my way of saying how light I sometimes feel .,, compared to that heavy feeling ... sometimes I feel energetically light and peaceful ..,
Maybe the clouds are the word ideas ..
Thankyou for your thoughts on my poem . Iām glad you enjoyed this š
I guess the bubbles could be the poets on here.., or the bubbles might be ā angels ā too
I do feel safe and supported on here.
Really appreciate your thoughts on my poem
Beautiful words yellowrose, may that rose be forever with you.
Andy
Perfect piece.
I love this poem
Beautifully written, gorgeous imagery, brought tears to my eyes! "Safe and supported..." Lovely!
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