what it would be like without you- please never leave.

brianna jean zeiger

As the last grain of sand falls down,

the transparent walls of the hourglass

Flowers begin to wither as if it is the summit of Autumn. 

 

After losing you, time rapidly passed me by.

I still have yet to forget your presence,

I still have yet to forget the eloquently articulated words you spoke to me with. 

 

The love we fabricated seemed as if,

We were admirable artwork combined into one being

Derived from a struggling artist looking for a chance.  

 

Waking up and turning over,

To a cold, empty spot beneath the comforter 

Proves that time does not heal all wounds. 

 

I gave up on faith after losing you, 

I no longer believed in the trees, 

the grass, 

the weeds, 

the flowers,

and all that surrounds us.

 

I am left with nothing,

No sense of self or belonging in this,

dull,

miserable world. 

A world without you.



  • Author: b.j. zeiger (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 25th, 2021 00:05
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this piece for my creative writing course. It is about how I would feel if my s/o were to leave.
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 11
Get a free collection of Classic Poetry ↓

Receive the ebook in seconds 50 poems from 50 different authors


Comments1

  • John Lee

    When we find that love, we get lost in it. When we lose that love we are lost from ourselves.



To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.