My brother\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s coffin 

cottonevie



Autumn is the season he decided to die

Mother couldn’t chose the coffin for him 

So we waited till winter 

When the time arrived, we chose the coffin he could have wanted

 I carried the marble coffin through the forest and lowered into the ground 

I was regretful of the coffin that was chosen for him  

He din’t like fancy objects 

That coffin was too lavish

  • Author: cottonevie (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 27th, 2021 21:16
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  • L. B. Mek

    (he 'decided' to die)?
    this is a disturbing line,
    from what appears to be a heartfelt dedication, wonderfully worded
    thanks for sharing...
    reminded me of Seamus Heaney's heart wrenching poem 'Mid-Term Break'
    and that legendary last line:
    'A four-foot box, a foot for every year.'
    ( https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/57041/mid-term-break )



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