Fault Line

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  L. B. Mek October 1st, 2021 03:26

  had to read this two or three times and contemplate, why it gripped me with such intensity,
  there's a sense of stunted despair in your lines,
  like, even attempting to pretend and project a feigned sense of normality
  could potentially become, that one step too far..
  instead this words, seemingly represent a lifeline of rope, where
  they allow us, to look at
  than experience:
  'the tides of thirst,
  the dam,
  opened wide
  —for better or worse'..
  (a deeply layered write
  beautifully worded
  profound poetry!
  thanks for sharing, dear poet)
  

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  Kurt Philip Behm October 1st, 2021 10:24

  And once again, I thank you.

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  Laura🌻 October 1st, 2021 18:52

  Kurt,
  
  •”Fault Line”
  
  A ‘fault line’ of life will either make us better or it will make us worse. It will be disruptive and cause changes. Upheavals, especially unexpected ones, may seem unfair, but they’re not always dreadful.
  
  •“The Last Mirage”
  
  Diving in all the way…
  ‘for better or worse’…
  as one of my physicians said!
  
  I did a lot of pondering during the reading of your two intense poems. So much to think about!
  
  Thank you for sharing.
  
  Laura🌻
  
  

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    Kurt Philip BehmOctober 1st, 2021 21:34

    Thanks Laura.

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    Laura🌻October 1st, 2021 22:26

    My pleasure, Kurt.