Feel sorry for the wind

The wind outside cries

lonely in the outside world whilst we comfort ourselves with a duvet 

she cries , releasing tears into the sky 


the wind outside cries 

I listen and I think if she had feelings 

she’d want to go back to centre 

not just be crying in so many places in the sky 

Scattered and helplessly out of control 

tears falling with a want for more 


the wind cries whilst we try to comfort ourselves with a duvet 


but maybe just maybe she wants a duvet 

she wants to go back to centre 


the wind doesn’t want to be something scattered

she wants to be centred and wrapped up in comfort 

not in the outside world , feeling alone , bare , vulnerable 

without a coat of any kind 


and she’s jealous of those who are feeling comfort 

have a duvet and a hug 


the winds crying 

and all alone , wishing for more 


and I feel sorry for her


in a way I can understand the feelings of the wind 


  • Teddy.15

    Dear Rose, what a beautiful poem, with such peace within, actually asking those questions whether she is jealous of those who are under warmth and admitting to the thoughts at all, very powerful and I say Kudos dear friend. Thought provoking and I too like to think of the wind as a lady. Gorgeous ๐Ÿ’–

  • Goldfinch60

    Super words yellowrose, may the wind always bring you the love you deserve.


  • orchidee

    Bit windy indoors now - you know why! heehee.

    • yellowrose

      Lol , looking after the wind because itโ€™s so sad but you have to put up with the wind around you ... thatโ€™s caring ๐Ÿ™‚

      Thanks for the comment orchidee ๐Ÿ™‚

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