L. B. Mek

Faulty instinct’s

 

Beside me, an apple is decaying

entrenched teeth marks

as a gluttonous array, of tell-tale signs

no autopsy needed for this atrocity 

 

I had no appetite, initially 

for a killing spree

till Spring’s succulent beauty

entrapped me;

 

vibrant red, glistening 

crisp skin, smoothly mesmerising 

perfectly ample curves, teasing

enthralled: by a single glimpse

 

I stare, blankly

my lips, still drip its sweet essence 

quenched taste buds, crooning

yet somewhere deep within

 

I mourn.

A vigil of gratitude 

momentary, yet timeless

and entirely heartfelt: in the moment.

 

Beyond my soon forgotten, of vanquished 

sun-kissed colours, glitter endlessly

a Pear-shaped outline sways

my eyes, refocus: hungrily. 

 

Across fate’s ley lines

hunger fuelled darkness, takes-aim

stalking, jewel adorned fingers

enticed, by their Fruit Conquering: prowess…

 

 

© L. B. Mek

May 2018

Comments7

  • Teddy.15

    Dearest Mek, I could see Adam in this piece probably from the very first line and your title. Succulent in imagery my dear friend, a treat for the soul a fantastic last stanza too. Thank you. X

    • L. B. Mek

      well, it does hint on a lot of different
      if interconnected, popular notes
      just glad you enjoyed the read, dear poetess
      humbly, I thank you!

    • aDarkerMind

      imagery at it's finest i would say.

      • L. B. Mek

        ha!
        coming from you, that's just embarrassing
        but luckily I have the pride-o-meter level
        of a scavenger rat..
        so, I'll just trigger my ignorance barrier
        and say thank you! lol
        (ignore me, I'm just being silly my friend)

      • Jay-Lee Jane

        I adore this poem, the imagery used here is mind-blowing and i love it!

        • L. B. Mek

          wow!
          I was just joking about this
          in the comment before you, lol
          y'all are just too kind
          but still, I recognise how lucky I am
          to be supported by such forgiving, gifted poets
          and so I thank you, sincerely!

        • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

          Woah extraordinary poem, scintillating and metaphoric perhaps on the fruit, the apple. Kudos!!

          Plz do read and comment my newest poem too

          • L. B. Mek

            thank you!
            (but please know, I would have read your poem
            without you commenting on mine;
            and you should only comment
            if you're interested in what you read
            there is no hidden 'quid pro quo' system on MPS)

            • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

              Sure i will remember that for you but others will not comment on mine unless i expressly request them. And i only comment on a poem if i find it worthy and impressive to my taste on my rounds of reading. I don't give false praises. I found yours very interesting of course.
              Thanks,

            • spilleronsheet

              Imagery at it’s best😌

              • L. B. Mek

                glad you liked the read, thank you!
                for such an encouraging comment

                • spilleronsheet

                  Your welcome 😊

                • John Prophet

                  Very earthy write! ✍️

                  Great work.

                  • L. B. Mek

                    earthy?
                    ok, I would have gone for fruity? lol
                    thank you!
                    appreciate your supportive comment

                  • Paul Bell

                    After Adam and Eve, did God go back to the drawing board. At least he kept the humble apple tree. Class write.

                    • L. B. Mek

                      I have never met eve or adam,
                      I have only met the consequences to my own choices..
                      thanks for taking the time to read and comment
                      really appreciate your encouraging words



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