Marie

A Tortured Soul

A tortured soul can see no light,
brightest day is darkest night.
Darkness overwhelms each day of the year,
each moment is ruled by darkest fear.

Nothing seems real living in a world surreal.
Numbed to the bone, nothing I feel.
Inside is a void nothing can fill,
each molehill insurmountable, a bitter pill.

All joy has gone, drained to the last.
There's no present, no future, only the past.
Longing to sleep, yet wide awake,
uncertain how much more I can take.

Enveloped by dark thoughts, filled with fear.
Unable to laugh or shed a tear.
Feeling I'm dead, though I'm still alive,
as once more into the darkness I dive.

Note: This poem is not a personal write. It is my muse writing on what life can be like for a beautiful soul living in a world where light does not enter...

Comments11

  • Neil Higgins

    A very deep set of words here Marie.The imagery is outstanding.
    "Living" where there was no light,would be a complete nightmare I think.

    • Marie

      Thank you for kindly reading and for your very kind comment, dear Neil. I am most grateful and appreciative...

    • L. B. Mek

      captured that bleak reality, we all have to traverse in life
      from time to time, or much worse
      watch the ones we love: struggle with...
      thanks for sharing, dear poet

      • Marie

        Thank you for kindly reading, dear poet and for your very kind comment also...

      • Teddy.15

        I Iove your darker muse and the beautiful rhyme that is presented in this stunning piece of poetry. It certainly could have been about me.when I was.in my 20's a masterpiece dear Marie. 😍

        • Marie

          Thank you so very much for kindly reading, dear Teddy and for kindly sharing with me. Sending you beautiful golden light with love, dear friend πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

        • orchidee

          A thoughtful write Marie.
          Ahh, it's about those who hear me singing. I knows. Noooo!! lol.

          • Marie

            Thank you, dear Mr. O! I am certain that the Angels listen intently when you sing, Mr. O! Your voice is sweet and pure, just like theirs... Thank you for kindly reading and for your delightful comment. Bless you always...

          • Fay Slimm.

            Powerfully captured that feeling of entrapment in darkest black for a soul who knows beauty. Thank you Marie for setting out the deep of despair when light leaves the heart and night brings fear. So good to realize it is not from personal experience your pen writes this.

            • Marie

              Thank you for kindly reading, dear Fay and for your very encouraging comment. Gratitude with beautiful blessings your way, dear friend...

            • Joe Dawson

              Dark days, mood episodes, intense emotional states, changes in energy and one's ability to function, bipolar - thankfully there is help on the internet and elsewhere. A well focussed piece and timely too. Joe

              • Marie

                Hello Joe and thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for your kind comment. Bless you always, dear poet...

              • Accidental Poet

                A little bit of everyone in your finely penned words Marie. πŸ‘

                • Marie

                  Thank you for kindly reading, dear A.P. and for your very kind and encouraging comment too. Bless you always...

                • Goldfinch60

                  That darkness can take over lives so often but I know that in any darkness there is always a glimmer of light and that is the way we should be heading.

                  Good dark write Marie.

                  Andy

                  • Marie

                    Thank you for kindly reading and for your very wise and kind comment, dear Andy. Bless you always...

                  • spilleronsheet

                    It’s dark
                    But so vivid
                    Each of us carries the fear
                    It’s your words
                    But stories of each one of us
                    Yet under the dark clouds
                    A sun tears the sky
                    Illuminating us inside
                    May all fears diminish soon
                    We light and gleam soon

                    • Marie

                      Thank you for kindly reading, dear poet and for your very poetic comment. Thank you again...

                      • spilleronsheet

                        Your poetry has so much depth. Can’t stop replying.

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                      • Floreann

                        Marie an amazing write so well expressed and wonderfully written and heartfelt well done..

                        • Marie

                          Thank you for kindly reading and for your very kind and generous comment, Floreann. Wishing you a very blessed and wonderful day to enjoy, dear friend...

                        • Having hope

                          I don't know what to say and how explain what I feel after reading this poem.
                          liked it so much.πŸ™ƒ

                          • Marie

                            Hello Ali, thank you for kindly reading and for your kind comment. Have no worries, it is ok not to be able to write on paper what you feel. Bless you always, dear poet...

                            • Having hope

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