🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

The value of life and oxygen

Dear God I thank you
for every single precious breath
And when you'll place us in paradise
   We shall thank you then for death.

People round the world gasping for breath, breathless,
short of breath, some unable to catch their breath,
       some breathing their last,
some on artificial costly breathalysers .
How many times do we thank God
for the countless free breaths we breathe our entire life??
Oxygen o2 more valuable and scarce than diamonds nowadays.
         Respiration, the main need of all life
Those who eventually recover from covid and find their breath again
             can finally breathe a sigh of relief.
Yet heavenly sights in paradise  will be sure
  to take our breath away anyway.

           Life or afterlife
      Here and hereafter
   Life's a gift from God
Now and thereafter
Why end it here and now
Why not extend fun and laughter?
When my DNA and RNA expires with me
  May God Resurrect and revive it in me
I live and die for an extension of life in afterlife
   God grant me that part eternity
To search for the meaning and purpose of life
   is to search and find the Creator of all life
      i know there's out there somewhere
     in Allah's universe, a heavenly portal
      that will lead me to eternal bliss
            designed by Allah the immortal.
Imagine a perfect heavenly life with no fear , death or problems
That's a life to die for, when Allah transports us to those realms.

    An abode with no sickness or illness
Only peace and total eternal happiness
No viruses but rather real flying horses like real Pegasuses
   We could get to ride and fly the universe
   with angelic wings without planes or buses
But you have to work to earn and deserve that heavenly paradise
        Just follow God's latest holy book, so perfect and so wise.

Comments6

  • Lauretta13

    I like the meaning of this poem
    I love the last stanza most especially

    • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

      Yayy glad to know that's your fav part because that means a lot and makes rational sense to us. Warmest thanks for a bright comment, take care🥰

    • Lauretta13

      I like the meaning of this poem
      I love the last stanza most especially

    • Having hope

      Wow! Liked it so much.
      You have written it full of scientific views in the spiritual way with a lot of emotions. 😄

      • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

        Um this hasn't so much science as my other religious writes though. Thanks soo much for great poem! God bless,

        • Having hope

          you are welcome...

        • Marie

          Your poem imparts to this reader how grateful you are to your God and how appreciative you are for all the gifts bestowed which others are not blessed with. A finely penned poem, well expressed, joyful and happy. Thank you for sharing, dear poet...

          • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

            Dear Marie warmest thanks for your fine comment, majority of humans are still blessed with oxygen and more people survive covid than died from it, so we should be thankful that its not killing most of the humans.
            Besides there are theories that covid is a human construct or spread by human errors.
            Take care and stay safe.

            • Marie

              Thank you dear poet. You take care, stay safe and keep well too. Wishing you a very blessed and beautiful day to enjoy...

            • annonymouswonder

              Awesome poem, I love the depth and meaning of it! El Shaddai loves us all so dearly that He blesses us everyday and wants to spend eternity with us and that’s simply spectacular!!

              • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

                The name El shaddai sounds great, God has many names yeah. It's also worth notice that the hebrew and aramaic bibles as well as the Arabic bibles use the word Allah for God. Warmest thanks for the positive comment.

              • L. B. Mek

                well written, thanks for sharing



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