Jerry Reynolds

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old moon
sees clearly in the
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Comments6

  • Teddy.15

    top marks just brilliant dear Jerry what a wonderful metaphor.

  • orchidee

    Good write Jerry.

  • Paul Bell

    This works great forwards and backwards.

  • Fay Slimm.

    Compelling three liner dear Jerry - - love the wise brevity and the clever title.

    • Jerry Reynolds

      High praise indeed dear Fay. many thanks

    • Robert Haigh

      I see the moon, the moon sees me. A witty three-liner, Jerry.

    • L. B. Mek

      'Nature's
      tidal regret, force:
      Lunar'
      (this is another of your profound shorty's, Jerry
      thanks for sharing and inspiring my little scribbled reply)

      • Jerry Reynolds

        Thanks. L.B. for the praise and the scribble.



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