Solutions.
I found this quote inspirational.
"Love's gift cannot be given, it just waits
to be accepted." (Anon.)
The suchness of love's fragrant devotion
lies in ways
its acceptable potion is made.
Being tenderly constant sweetens trust
in each other
without which contentment can fade.
Disbelief dilutes strength of intentions
and effort
for doubt renders eagerness inactive.
Best motive stales faced with indifference
counting too
costly perfume for tolerance factor.
The keeping of togetherness-fragrance
lies a lot
in the way scented solutions are made.
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Fay Slimm. (
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Good write Fay.
The 'like' has gone wonky for your poem - on my screen anyway!
Your experience of trying to make love fragrant brought me a big smile Neil - - have tried that myself before and it never seemed to work - glad you liked the metaphor anyway and thanks ever so for your visit and read.
'costly perfume for tolerance factor.
The keeping of togetherness-fragrance'..
this is poetry at its refined, finest!
'in my humble opinion'
thank you, dear Fay
How supportive and encouraging your comment on Solutions dear friend - thanking you very much for your continued interest in my take on subjects affecting the heart.
.. One does not have to hit the heart shaped like button to know that these words hold the solution to a question asked untold times around the globe .. However, I have hit it so many times now that am beginning to feel rather guilty ........ Penned with customary Fay Slimm prowess, if you don't mind me just sayin ............ Ah' tis good to be back ma'am .... 🙂 x
Ah - tis good to have you back again dearling along with your generous comments of interest and support...........thanking you gladly and warmly as ever....................x
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