The feeling when a leaf falls of a tree. The nervousness of when thunder strikes.
Emotions of emptiness or meaning?
Questions but no answers.
What is it i feel?
Is it about the leaf that will start growing, or the leaf that died?
The feeling when a leaf falls of a tree. The nervousness of when thunder strikes.
Emotions of emptiness or meaning?
Questions but no answers.
What is it i feel?
Is it about the leaf that will start growing, or the leaf that died?
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Comments3
Beautiful I love the way you made this thought provokingly clever!
Beautiful words👏
so impressive!
you literally infused that state of confusion
into the choice wording of your poetry
which then, insured
almost everyone who reads this poem
will be confused, at first read
and thereby immediately be transported
to that initial sensation/realisation
you yourself, was caught within..
Very impressive, indeed
showcasing a lot of natural poetic talent
that's been painstakingly sharpened, focused
into a highly penetrative skill..
So happy for you,
and thank you! for choosing to share
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