What is it i feel?

idhji

The feeling when a leaf falls of a tree. The nervousness of when thunder strikes.

Emotions of emptiness or meaning?

Questions but no answers.

What is it i feel? 

Is it about the leaf that will start growing, or the leaf that died?

  • Author: idhji (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 21st, 2021 20:11
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.
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Comments3

  • Lyriclitty

    Beautiful I love the way you made this thought provokingly clever!

  • Ruqaiya

    Beautiful words👏

  • L. B. Mek

    so impressive!
    you literally infused that state of confusion
    into the choice wording of your poetry
    which then, insured
    almost everyone who reads this poem
    will be confused, at first read
    and thereby immediately be transported
    to that initial sensation/realisation
    you yourself, was caught within..
    Very impressive, indeed
    showcasing a lot of natural poetic talent
    that's been painstakingly sharpened, focused
    into a highly penetrative skill..
    So happy for you,
    and thank you! for choosing to share



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