Maxine Smith

-x- Finally -x-

 

Finally finding my feet

Planted firm on the ground

That dread of defeat

Distant noise in the background

 

Time is now for success

Relishing with every breath

Thriving and fearless

Unashamed and tearless

 

Living dreams reality

Wings open and set free

Souring the skies of possibility

I finally dare to believe in me

 

 

 

 

 

Comments14

  • yellowrose

    Nice words Maxine ) it’s so important to feel safe and grounded

    • Maxine Smith

      Thank you for the read :):)

    • Lorna

      Of course you can do it Maxine.... no question........... just keep plowing forward.

      • Maxine Smith

        Thank you Lorna, nice to see your still on here :):)

      • Robert Haigh

        A lovely positive poem, Maxine! Congratulations on your career progress! I'm sure you'll continue to do just fine.

        • Maxine Smith

          Thank you Robert πŸ˜€

        • Teddy.15

          Such positivity, I adore this, fighting spirit and all. We can accomplish anything when we believe in ourselves.πŸ€—πŸŒΉπŸ€—

          • Maxine Smith

            Exactly right, thank you Teddy.

          • Munro

            Part of your brain has dreams
            Stay in your dreams because it’s a happy place

            • Maxine Smith

              Definitely my happy place, thank you Munro.

            • orchidee

              Good write Maxine.
              All ya gotta not believe in is my singing! No one has believed in it yet. heehee. They tried, but gave up! lol

            • Neville


              it sounds to me like she is finally what I had long hoped that she might become .. a free-bird ... and she brings with her a great return gift for all those who might visit this page .............. I am seriously proud of ya girl and dont care who knows ................. write on Max .. Your mate Me .. πŸ™‚

              • Maxine Smith

                Aw thank you Neville, such lovely words, much appreciated πŸ˜€

              • Paul Bell

                Reach for the sky. You've definitely been thrown in at the deep end, but that's a great learning curve.

                • Maxine Smith

                  Sky is the limit, thank you 😊

                • Fay Slimm.

                  A truly positive feel to this read amid loud applause for your recent and successful year of nursing dear Max - - so good to know you are moving forward and with good thoughts like you verse here I am sure you bound to win.

                  • Maxine Smith

                    Ah Fay, glad you liked the read, thank you.

                  • Accidental Poet

                    The vision you had two years ago is coming true. All that you've hoped for and deserve is waiting for you. πŸŒΉπŸ˜‰

                    • Maxine Smith

                      I know, about time isn’t it?! thanks for the read πŸ˜€

                    • Jeremy Leach

                      I like this. Carefully and well written. Wings open and set free, Souring the skies of possibility ... I love that imagery.

                      • Maxine Smith

                        Glad you liked, appreciate you stopping by, thank you πŸ˜€

                      • dusk arising

                        Good for you. I have just spent 3 week in hospital, some in isolation, so I know what a really worthwhile career nursing is. Such a giving and caring time. I wish you every success in completing your years ahead and future of happiness.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Super words Maxine and I am sure your belief in yourself will take you to the wondrous places that are waiting for you in your life.

                        Good to see you back.

                        Andy

                      • Poetic Dan

                        What a gem! And congratulations on finding peace in your journey and yourself!



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