There's no greater
joy than loves first kiss
There's no greater
warmth than its light
A soothing warmth and
such an enjoyable bliss
Like the soft caresses
of warm tender lips
Joining underneath
the stars at night
There's no greater
joy than loves first kiss
A joyous occasion
as memories slips
When loves first light,
shined ever bright
A soothing warmth and
such an enjoyable bliss
Love blossomed with
It's soothing caress
And its warm embrace
Oh, it felt so right
There's no greater
joy than loves first kiss
The moonlight whispered
" Feel my soothing kiss"
And sent down its
soothing glow of light
A soothing warmth and
such an enjoyable bliss
The heavens blessing
Us with it's caress
The moon and stars
shining ever bright
There's no greater
joy than loves first kiss
A soothing warmth and
such an enjoyable bliss
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Author:
Dove (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 24th, 2021 18:36
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Comments5
I best try this! I keep attempting first kiss, but keep swooning. lol.
Thanks
absolutely stunning & I am absolutely stunned ............................ x
Such a warm flow to this lovely description of that very first kiss of love. Thanks for the sighs this write must bring to all its readers dear Dove.
Thank you kindly
nice execution
liked you highlighting the core elements in your form,
making it easily recognisable and by default, accessible
which also, makes it a learning tool
for anyone who may want to utilise that form..
love that we're going a little 'ooh la la,' with our risqué villanesque.. lol
as-ever, showcasing your depthless range, dear Poetess
Thanks Mek, exactly why I formatted this way! Tis easier than explaining, lol ! Thanks for stopping by
I just popped back to check whether your villanelle could stand up to the test of time ... and guess wot .. it can & does .............. x
Thanks Dear Neville, much appreciated
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