The darkness envelopes me,
the silence that once felt tranquil,
now irks me to death.
As I cut through the heavy, humid air,
I pant and gasp hopelessly for my breath,
and search desperately for lights' soothing care.
As I limp my way through this hell,
memories of past resurface,
Days long ago I bid farewell,
now put me in a fantasizing daze.
As I crawl out of this cave,
the light in front sets my eyes ablaze,
emotions inside me surge as I get what I crave,
And leave me in a maddening craze.
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Author:
krutarth (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I had a time in my life where I had lost my self confidence, and was gloomy all day long. I stayed like this for around 1 year, but was able to recover. \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\r\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\nThis poem tries to express my feelings when I had hit rock bottom. And how I felt when I regained my confidence.\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\r\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\n
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Comments2
A thoughtful sharing of your valuable experience. Glad you can retell it. Thanks for sharing this...I think I see courage here.
thanks a lot!
really well written,
thanks for choosing to share
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