It started with a small crack
cracks that slowly shattered me
shattered me that you slowly picked up
picked up and slowly build-up
build-up piece by piece
pieces of yesterday's cracks
yesterday's cracks that never leave
it never leaves cause it turned to be all these marks
marks that will forever remind me
remind me of how you fixed me.
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Author:
eL.r. (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Never let your shattered past remind you of your pain instead it should remind you of the people who never stop believing in you and supporting you with all their hearts.
- Category: Reflection
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Read the notes first, and I found your description of craking to really hit the mood as a whole! And don't get me started on the use of building yourself up! so symbolic and descriptive that it touches me in my recent events! keep it up!
thank you so much for your comment, I'll do my best to share more of my thoughts, 🙂
Brilliant!
(but, we still need
to be wary of those splinters
that entrenched themselves
too deep
in those bruises, that are yet
to heal)
thanks for sharing, such a relatable and comforting read
thank you for your appreciation, it really means a lot to someone like me whose an amateur in this field 🙂
we all are, and shall always be
that's the true beauty
of Poetry's meaningful humility!
(try not to compare yourself
just do you! and enjoy the ride)
thank you so much for this comforting word of yours, it fires up the desire in me to be more me, to not easily falter in anyone's opinion 🙂
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