The Sand And The Sea

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  Fay Slimm. November 5th, 2021 05:24

  So well spaced and relatable to many in that situation where being told is not all the story - - a compelling read Paul.

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    Paul BellNovember 5th, 2021 12:14

    Thanks Fay.

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  Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) November 5th, 2021 05:31

  So important to feel safe . I like this poem of yours )
  
  So many times in my life , I’ve had that feeling of feeling ‘ unsafe ‘
  
  A nice writing

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    Paul BellNovember 5th, 2021 12:28

    Thanks, Yedllowrose.

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  L. B. Mek November 5th, 2021 06:05

  we All live, a little
  in-between,
  between the waves of change
  and our memory's shores;
  those sands of Time, can't ever be defeated
  merely tiptoed: in between
  so as to experience
  life's, easier tides...
  (wonderful imagery, cleverly unfurled
  to add a level of sophistication to your poetry,
  thanks for sharing)

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    Paul BellNovember 5th, 2021 12:20

    Thanks, L. B

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  dusk arising November 5th, 2021 07:07

  Timeless imagery in this cunningly composed masterpiece which I read several times with joy.
  
  Into my favourites

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    Paul BellNovember 5th, 2021 12:23

    Thanks, Dusk.

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  Garth Rakumakoe November 5th, 2021 09:01

  This offering skillfully speaks about a lot in minimal expressions. A very good offering Paul. Nicely done. Faved.

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    Paul BellNovember 5th, 2021 12:30

    Thanks, Garth.

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  Goldfinch60 November 6th, 2021 01:23

  Fine words Paul, we all have times of good and bad in our lives but we also have that time when we know we are safe.
  
  Andy

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    Paul BellNovember 6th, 2021 04:24

    Definitely, Andy.

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  Lorna November 6th, 2021 09:27

  He's an introvert and I just love him. This is lovely and lonely.

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    Paul BellNovember 6th, 2021 11:10

    He sure is.