It's not about the line art drawing of a few broken light bulbs on page 36,
or about how it will look in typewriter font over a white blank page,
I don't want it to be about that,
if that's all this is then stop reading,
don't call it poetry until it leaves you shaking,
my words should not think for you,
I don't want them to,
I want you to feel something,
something that you've never felt before,
something you couldn't explain in any amount of words,
but it leaves you searching,
don't call it poetry until it leaves you craving,
until it makes you yearn to read it for the first time again,
to feel the bliss of before and experience the moment after,
like a rapture,
until you pore over it a thousand times and it still burns you up inside,
the words carve themselves into you and find a home where there wasn't an empty space before,
it should leave you breathless and starving,
restlessly seeking,
if you want a pretty picture and a quote,
stop reading.
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Author:
Elaine.Wells (
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- Published: November 5th, 2021 13:42
- Comment from author about the poem: This is technically directed at aesthetic short-form poetry, but to be honest, I have no problem with short-form poetry or the people who enjoy it. My problem is that poetry as an art form is being stripped down and simplified to be the most easily consumable version of itself and people are starting to think it's just an easier form of writing. In my opinion, short-form poetry can be just as good or better than long-form poetry if it has the right amount of work put in, but a lot of famous poets today use aestheticism as a crutch and I can't stand it.
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