Sleeping petals
woken up
by the
gently falling rain,
glistening raindrops
falling off the
unfurling petals...
rain-soaked and dewy
the flower smiles...
welcoming the rain
that fills her up.
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Author:
Jay (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 7th, 2021 02:27
- Comment from author about the poem: Flowers and trees in the gently falling rain, so beautiful.
- Category: Nature
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Comments6
Such a contrast for us humans you've brought together here. For it's only on occasion in youth that we enjoy the rainfall, mostly we all have negative feelings about it but who can say that flowers are not one of nature's delights.
Indeed, where would those flowers be without such rain.
Lovely uplifting poetry.
Thank you so much Dusk🥰🦋
Lovely poem 🙂🙂
Thank you dear Rose🥰🦋
Everything is so beautiful after the rain. We don't appreciate as much as we should. Love this poem
Yes it is. It sparkles when the sun comes out after the rain. Thank you SC🥰🦋
So beautifully said.... the tent of rain over us let's us examine everything quiet.
Thank you so much Lorna🥰🦋
Wow so beautifully composed
Each word contrasts a beautiful scene
The glistening drops on a velvet rose petal
Such a beautiful depiction
Well crafted dear poet
Thank you so much dear poet 🥰🦋
Happy to read the good words about the poem.
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