Flowers In The Rain

Jayasree

Sleeping petals

woken up

by the

gently falling rain,

glistening raindrops

falling off the 

unfurling petals...

rain-soaked and dewy

the flower smiles... 

welcoming the rain 

that fills her up.

 

 

 

  • Author: Jay (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 7th, 2021 02:27
  • Comment from author about the poem: Flowers and trees in the gently falling rain, so beautiful.
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 39
  • Users favorite of this poem: Saxon Crow, spilleronsheet
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  • dusk arising

    Such a contrast for us humans you've brought together here. For it's only on occasion in youth that we enjoy the rainfall, mostly we all have negative feelings about it but who can say that flowers are not one of nature's delights.

    Indeed, where would those flowers be without such rain.

    Lovely uplifting poetry.

    • Jayasree

      Thank you so much Dusk🥰🦋

    • Caring dove

      Lovely poem 🙂🙂

      • Jayasree

        Thank you dear Rose🥰🦋

      • Saxon Crow

        Everything is so beautiful after the rain. We don't appreciate as much as we should. Love this poem

        • Jayasree

          Yes it is. It sparkles when the sun comes out after the rain. Thank you SC🥰🦋

        • Lorna

          So beautifully said.... the tent of rain over us let's us examine everything quiet.

          • Jayasree

            Thank you so much Lorna🥰🦋

          • spilleronsheet

            Wow so beautifully composed
            Each word contrasts a beautiful scene
            The glistening drops on a velvet rose petal
            Such a beautiful depiction
            Well crafted dear poet

          • Jayasree

            Thank you so much dear poet 🥰🦋
            Happy to read the good words about the poem.



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