i cannot tell if it is genuine infatuation
or you are simply just stringing me along
for i am none the wiser, a fool
either way
i am down for the chase
i can surely make pace alongside you
some have credited me with too much
they say i’m talented at the art of perception
but something about you feels wrong
you are difficult to read
they say
the eyes are the window to the soul
but i honestly couldn’t tell you
what color yours are
and i’ve never been gifted at eye contact
yet i could stare into yours all day long
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Author:
robin jayne (
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Comments1
Brilliant!
really appreciate how centred you poetic voice is becoming, a lot less wasted lines in your poetry;
instead, favouring that acutely succinct delivery
of a blossoming wordsmith, whose learnt to identify
and accept, the veracity of your instinctive creativity
no need, for lengthy meaningless explanations, as pre-emptive excuses
or those, because-of - clauses
in your poetry,
just you, at one with your wholehearted ink
and owning your poetic expression..
a beautiful tone, to identify in a promising Poet's palette;
thank you! for choosing to share
(please forgive me if you find offense with anything I've said above, I meant well)
thank you! i really appreciate that you see my growth, posting my poems has given me an opportunity to get feedback and become a better writer. you’re very kind!
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