Under the lid and just a bit further
Past the senses and into the void
Through the side door
Or behind the feux curtain
Breathe in velvet and breathe out silk
Witness a lattice of iridescence
Listen for the spaces between the silence
Dip your hand into the sky
Savour the taste of everything and nothing at all
Dive inwards and find
The answers were there all along
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Author:
Angela-a (
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- Category: Spiritual
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I think this is very deep, refreshing, while also reflecting; deserving a big appreciation in my book.
sometimes taking a break to refresh, reflect, and deepen yourself is what we all need to find the answers that we seek.
Most of the time, it feels like the answers are refreshing, is deep, and force you to reflect as you make it!
Wow this is such a compliment! Thank you for reading
Very nice poem I want more!
Really like this , very nice poem 🙂
Thank you!
Am so glad I caught this example of fine poetic merit for which I send loud applause Angela - you capture with imagery a skillful talent to engage the reader - - this piece will go into my list of favourites and hoping to read more of your work.
Imagery is so crucial to my writing so I am elated that you enjoyed it 🙂
Well penned dear poet
A rich imagery flows by the pen of yours
Awaiting your beautiful writes
Thank you so much! I am eager to create more content and am thankful for the reads
Yes
Eagerly awaiting more creations of yours
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