Indefinitely
Broken and bleeding out now
Blood drips from my beating heart
Still you stare, silent
Leave me wondering if you
Will ever bleed too
And return my ardor vow
Or leave me to bleed and burn?
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Author:
melellendixon (
Offline) - Published: November 15th, 2021 00:44
- Comment from author about the poem: A choka touching on my youthful experience with unrequited love and false hope.
- Category: Love
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Comments2
Two very heavy subjects for sure. They can teach a lot of lessons, and usually provide more questions than answers.
P.S. Winter is gonna suck this year
Amazing way of putting it..but those are the questions that keep us all going! And I'll take snow over a derecho any day hahaha
another sincere wording
of such relatable feelings
and I really like
the way you inform us
of the poetic form, you choose
to express your poetry with
makes reading your works
even more instructive and meaningful,
thanks for sharing
thank you so much, it means the world 🙂
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