I hate

Japot

I hate socializing
but i love socializing with you

I hate leaving the house
but i love leaving it for you

I hate existing 
but i love existing with you

I hate people 
but I love them more when Im with you

I hate life 
but i love life with you

I hate everything 
but I love it more when Im with you

You are the one i need
in order to suceed

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  • Author: Japot (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 18th, 2021 12:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: Thinking
  • Category: Love
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Comments1

  • Gunnar

    hi there, I like this little poem...thinking though..you use hate love in the first 3 verses...would it be an idea to keep that rythm? In v4 and v6? ...for example v4...I hate people, but I love them more when Im with you. v6 I hate everything, but I love it more when Im with you. Hope my comment does not offend...just liked the rythm in the first 3 verses 🙂

    • Japot

      Thanks for your reply, I didnt really read it carefully before posting but you are right!
      Of course the rythm should continue, liked your sentences so i added them
      Thanks for your input 🙂

      • Gunnar

        honoured and a pleasure 🙂



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