I hate socializing
but i love socializing with you
I hate leaving the house
but i love leaving it for you
I hate existing
but i love existing with you
I hate people
but I love them more when Im with you
I hate life
but i love life with you
I hate everything
but I love it more when Im with you
You are the one i need
in order to suceed
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- Author: Japot ( Offline)
- Published: November 18th, 2021 12:50
- Comment from author about the poem: Thinking
- Category: Love
- Views: 29
Comments1
hi there, I like this little poem...thinking though..you use hate love in the first 3 verses...would it be an idea to keep that rythm? In v4 and v6? ...for example v4...I hate people, but I love them more when Im with you. v6 I hate everything, but I love it more when Im with you. Hope my comment does not offend...just liked the rythm in the first 3 verses 🙂
Thanks for your reply, I didnt really read it carefully before posting but you are right!
Of course the rythm should continue, liked your sentences so i added them
Thanks for your input 🙂
honoured and a pleasure 🙂
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