You were the one who put me here
But don’t take any credit
I never would’ve been this way
You just as much as said it
I need to find a way to be
But there’s no pressing pause
Letting go of everything
And seeing the real cause
Apologies are nothing now
I’m deaf to empty words
Your energy is wasted here
Your lies go on unheard
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Angela-a (
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Your poetry I like, feels neat and sophisticated.
However, this site works best for readers and poets alike when there is a response, some dialogue between the poet and those who have taken the trouble to comment on the work.
Otherwise - diminishing returns in terms of readership.
Thank you for your thoughts! I do not always remember to reply to these so I appreciate the reminder 🙂
all is forgivable, until
that featherweight tape
of Trust
is fractured or broken
at which point
the ink of consequence, simply
taints - everything
and deems, it all
irreversibly unsalvageable..
(a relatable read, thanks for sharing)
Once again such a thoughtful response, I always look forward to your comments!
Beautifully penned dear poet
It’s very emotive
After being hurt, an apology can’t mend the ways
Once the heart is shattered, nothing can glue it again
Thank you! Capturing the feeling of betrayal is hard but I am happy it came through strong
I can understand dear poet
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