Alluring Figures Copulate.
When two hearts electrify
Painting oceans with arousal
The seductive glow of pornographic study
Suggesting naughty behaviour
Designed for indecent exposure
Thrilling fingers inspire
Tingling lustful thoughts
As flesh meets flesh
A new adventure endeavours
Bringing satisfaction between the thighs
His carnal bone motivates pleasure
Savouring the excited honey-pot
Drawing intercourse from naked bodywork
When frame exploits physique
Implementing faster movement
With raw and dirty enthusiasm
His manhood's activity intoxicating
To fixed screaming moans,
Creating erotic forms
Fulfilling raunchy requirements
When servicing the core.
Written By: Katie Clarke
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Author:
kitty the naughty poet (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I believe this poem speaks for its self. Please feel free to let me know your thoughts though.
- Category: Erotic
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Comments3
its a good job you are happily married otherwise Orchidee would swoon and I would be around like a shot ..
hahaha
its quite hard
to poetically, portray
sensual arousal: alongside
intensity of impassioned, emotionality;
that worded bridge, between skin
and intoxication of inflamed feelings
is, slippery;
lean a word too much towards, physicality
and you lose that, sensitivity
to nuanced sensuality;
then again, ignore the vivid portrayal of prerequisite physical intimacy, actions
and it all reads, vanilla lacklustre...
(that's why I appreciate your write
and how close you managed to angle, your lines
capturing - just enough, of both elements
to insure your poem
is more poetic, erotic: Art
than the worded obscenity of common pornographic, fictionality)
thank you for your comment, its good to know my work is appreciated
Why, yes, swoon!
The only 'bone' I know of, is the one I give my (imaginary) dog Fido. He and I say: 'Glad some one(s) are having fun!' lol.
lol thanks for reading
Will your other poems be too much for me? Will I swoon?! Probably - lol.
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