Notice of absence from Jay-Lee Jane
just returned after losing my love for writing
just returned after losing my love for writing
Roses are red,
Watch my words ring true,
Close the door when you go,
This is my final goodbye to you.
Roses are red,
I won't miss you,
And a big part of me is glad,
Because I am so much better without you.
Roses are red,
You're abuse isn't new,
All I know
Is I'm so much happier without you.
- Author: JJ Jane (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: November 22nd, 2021 05:52
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 35
Comments2
I think they got your message.....short and to the point - nicely done.
I suppose at your position on life's journey interpersonal relationships would be a big preoccupation, but I personally have no picture of Gin Gin in my head - I would very much like a word picture of the place and your position there (only if you want to).
A well conveyed message with a powerful poetry
Abuses are a total no
Well said dear poet
Roses are red
And the poetry on the point
Thank you for commenting, im glad you enjoyed this poem 🙂
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