What I think to say when I’ve drank the day.

mapnmycapn

What scale of life will we sacrifice

To not die

Its not a care to me because things look fine

I know it’s not

I can’t relate

And I’m waiting for something that I know WILL come

But the sound reads reads react

And remain inside

For to save your life might take your life.

They reach us but they don’t touch. 

  • Author: mapnmycapn (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 25th, 2021 21:10
  • Comment from author about the poem: Thoughts I thought relevant drunk in ones current standing with you lot.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 21
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • L. B. Mek

    surrealist in its sparse of detail
    and abstract in its wording
    but still, to me at least
    your words hit home..
    (thanks for sharing and inspiring
    my own little scribbled reply)
    'humanity's saving grace, is not
    in its words
    it's always been, in the deeds
    we remember
    with its inked legacy of immortality
    in our poetry..'
    (it doesn't matter
    if we ignore the good advice in our lives
    99 times out of a hundred, it only matters
    that, one Time: it hit home
    and opened
    our clustered mind's, windows
    to give us
    a glimpse, at what potential our life
    is surrounded by...'
    (Death, is only allowed
    one - say
    in our Life
    everything else, is ours
    to find
    own and rejoice - in)



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