Notice of absence from Jay-Lee Jane
just returned after losing my love for writing
just returned after losing my love for writing
Birds in the sky fly free,
so free.
Birds in the sky are free,
not me.
not me for who i am,
not me for you ma'am,
birds in the sky are free,
but not me.
slain and shackled: holey ground,
this newfound betrayal can be found.
Birds in the sky fly free, so free.
but not me.
Comments3
wonderful poetry
great use of purposed repetition,
thanks for sharing
Thank you so very much
It’s poetic
It’s beauty
Though pain and tears lace these lines
Your free
Cause your words are free
And with your words with wings
You shall fly from the cage you dwell in
Well crafted poetry dear friend
Thank you so much for taking your time to comment. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Simple, yet it has depth. Short, but carries duration. A fantastic read. Well done.
Also I agree with not being free. (Me personally)
Thank you so much for taking your time to comment. I'm very grateful.
I hope you find your wings someday.
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.