birds in the sky

Jay-Lee Jane


Notice of absence from Jay-Lee Jane
just returned after losing my love for writing

Birds in the sky fly free,

so free.

Birds in the sky are free,

not me.

 

not me for who i am,

not me for you ma'am,

birds in the sky are free,

but not me.

 

slain and shackled: holey ground,

this newfound betrayal can be found.

Birds in the sky fly free, so free.

but not me.

  • Author: JJ Jane (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 26th, 2021 05:21
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 58
  • User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.
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Comments3

  • L. B. Mek

    wonderful poetry
    great use of purposed repetition,
    thanks for sharing

    • Jay-Lee Jane

      Thank you so very much

    • spilleronsheet

      It’s poetic
      It’s beauty
      Though pain and tears lace these lines
      Your free
      Cause your words are free
      And with your words with wings
      You shall fly from the cage you dwell in
      Well crafted poetry dear friend

      • Jay-Lee Jane

        Thank you so much for taking your time to comment. I am so glad you enjoyed it.

      • Nicholas Browning

        Simple, yet it has depth. Short, but carries duration. A fantastic read. Well done.

        Also I agree with not being free. (Me personally)

        • Jay-Lee Jane

          Thank you so much for taking your time to comment. I'm very grateful.
          I hope you find your wings someday.



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