Teddy.15

Somewhere Up There

 

 

When down from the sky

 

Comes the rain sleet and the snow

 

You’ll be here with me.

 

 

 

Comments9

  • Nicholas Browning

    In time I'll find peace,
    And in its stream eternal,
    I'll be there with you.

    A haiku never hurt nobody 😛
    Enjoyed the read Teddy!

    • Teddy.15

      thank you dear Nicolas if rain and snow can touch us from above so can a lost soul. xxxxx

    • orchidee

      A fine write Teddy. Yep, I'll be there with ya! lol.

      • Teddy.15

        lol thats the spirit darling orchi. lol

      • Fay Slimm.

        A super Sen. with romance in its lines - - thanks for this great read Teddy

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you Fay, i'm so glad you got romance from this, i love when people see different things from my poems, actually i am romantic even if not many see it, i'm glad you do, thank you my dear friend.

        • Neville



          Blessed be .. this is beautiful .. N

          • Teddy.15

            thank you dear Neville, blessed be my dear friend. thank you. x

          • dusk arising

            "Somewhere over the rainbow skies are blue, and the dreams that you dare to dream... really do come true"

            Where would we be without the sky for it's rainbows of hope and our dreams of desire.

            • Teddy.15

              Dusk, such beauty in your words my dear friend, thank you so much. 💖 This in fact is about those who are.lost coming down in rain form or indeed snow to touch us from heaven. But I absolutely love that different people see different things my dear Dusky.

            • Paul Bell

              Three beautiful lines, and I'm sure the person in question would love it.

              • Teddy.15

                So sweet dear Paul, 💖 the ones I'm speaking of here are in heaven but I am so so so thankful that you and a few others see this more as a romantic poem. I love that you all see my actual personality and my poetry. Really amazing compliment 😍

              • Goldfinch60

                Every time Teddy, every time.

                Andy

                • Teddy.15

                  Fabulous My dear friend Andy. 💖 Thank you.

                • Garth Rakumakoe

                  Reminds me of the song "Danny Boy" rendered by Aaron Neville. Very tender, very endearing. Thank you Teddy.

                  • Teddy.15

                    I've loved his voice since I was really young, what a lovely thing to say dear Garth, thank you dear poet. 💖

                  • spilleronsheet

                    Few lines
                    Gave me different emotions
                    First I read it gave me the feel of lost love found in the long gone lover
                    I read it again
                    It gave me the feels of the seasons touching me
                    How addicted I was to read it again
                    And I felt God touched my soul



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