Vamsi Sudha

With You ...Without You..

With You, day seems Bright

Without You, day is also Fright


With You time seems to Fly

Without You, I wait for time to Fly


With You, I lose my very Existence

Without You, its sheer Subsistence


With You, words seem to Stream

Without You, words go below Extreme!


With You, mere presence smiles Beam

Without You, loneliness is sullen Gleam!!


With You, smiles become Laughter

Without You, smiles are miles away, Hereafter


With You, every touch energy Sparks

Without You, I am fuseless Darks


With You, life is dramatic like a Rainbow

Without You, life is tempestuous Tornado!!


  • spilleronsheet

    A very beautiful poetry
    With you and without you
    I feel life less without you
    I feel living when I have the happy you in me
    Hope we have a great day ahead dear Vamsi

    • Vamsi Sudha

      That's such a delightful comment 🙂
      You will surely have a great Day and a Life too....believe me , The end of a Tunnel is always bright !!!

      • spilleronsheet

        I am awaiting to see the end of the tunnel

      • Lorna

        Isn't it wonderful to have someone you can say these things about.... lovely Vamsi....

        • Vamsi Sudha

          Thank you soo much Lorna , for those warm comments !!

        • Quijote

          Vamsi before reading your note I read as with or without God. A life without having a relationship with God must be so lacking.

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