With You, day seems Bright
Without You, day is also Fright
With You time seems to Fly
Without You, I wait for time to Fly
With You, I lose my very Existence
Without You, its sheer Subsistence
With You, words seem to Stream
Without You, words go below Extreme!
With You, mere presence smiles Beam
Without You, loneliness is sullen Gleam!!
With You, smiles become Laughter
Without You, smiles are miles away, Hereafter
With You, every touch energy Sparks
Without You, I am fuseless Darks
With You, life is dramatic like a Rainbow
Without You, life is tempestuous Tornado!!
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Author:
Vamsi Sudha (
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- Comment from author about the poem: With You ...Without You !! An attempt to express my different feelings of life !!
- Category: Love
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Comments3
A very beautiful poetry
With you and without you
I feel life less without you
I feel living when I have the happy you in me
Hope we have a great day ahead dear Vamsi
That's such a delightful comment 🙂
You will surely have a great Day and a Life too....believe me , The end of a Tunnel is always bright !!!
I am awaiting to see the end of the tunnel
Isn't it wonderful to have someone you can say these things about.... lovely Vamsi....
Thank you soo much Lorna , for those warm comments !!
Vamsi before reading your note I read as with or without God. A life without having a relationship with God must be so lacking.
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