Frigid

Draven

After the rainfall, the sky is grey.
Rays of sunlight peek out from behind the clouds.
The beams of light illuminate the water on the grass.
The frigid air kisses her face as she takes that first step outside.

 

Nach dem Regen ist der Himmel grau.
Sonnenstrahlen lugen hinter den Wolken hervor.
Die Lichtstrahlen beleuchten das Wasser auf dem Gras.
Die kalte Luft küsst ihr Gesicht, als sie den ersten Schritt nach draußen macht.

  • Author: Draven (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 3rd, 2021 04:24
  • Comment from author about the poem: Day 2 of my poetry prompt challenge. I decided that this should tie in with Graupel (from Day 1).
  • Category: Gothic
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Comments4

  • orchidee

    Good write D. You've survived Day 2.
    Makes sense not to be TOO long, unless you feel like longer poems! Any sort welcome on here 🙂

    • Draven

      Thank you. 🙂 I hadn't thought too much about the length, but short felt right (and also less daunting)!

      • orchidee

        Ooohh yes - sometimes - why say 5 words when 20 will do?! lol.

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      • L. B. Mek

        well weaved imagery
        enhancing, than distracting
        from your poetry,
        thanks for sharing

        • Draven

          That is lovely feedback. Thank you 🙂

        • Lorna

          Love this ... love shorties....

        • Neville


          You just nailed it Draven ... made me shiver between my smiles ...... Neville

          • Draven

            Thank you!



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