Don’t let the poetry
weaken the poem
The structure a servant
—for what’s to be known
(The New Room: December, 2021)
Life Sentence
After the diagnosis,
each moment a dream
of years and then months
and days in between
After the surgery,
the dream became real
time again captured
—the sentence repealed
(The New Room: December, 2021)
- Author: Kurt Philip Behm ( Offline)
- Published: December 3rd, 2021 10:29
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 16
- Users favorite of this poem: Lauraš», Jerry Reynolds
Comments3
Kurt,
ā¢āThe Forest & The Treesā
A befitting title for your
two couplets.
ā¦without the trees, thereās no forest!
Lauraš»
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Damn, Kurt.
That is a dead-center shot.
Thanks Jerry
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